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I feel that I have most of my ideas written down in the second draft that will go towards the final written out, though it is rather crudely put together. I have some concerns with my ability to connect my individual paragraphs together in a cohesive manner without rambling on or rehashing the same ideas over and over again in order to tie them together in a common point. I know I will need to elaborate more on how my work connects to literacy more; for at the moment there is a leap of thought necessary to truly make the connection at the moment but will hopefully be fixed by the third iteration.